Motion Graphic Development

After piecing all of the separate videos of my motion graphic together, I ended up with this

I then took this video into my group crit to receive feedback on what others thought.

The biggest problem was the speed and flow: this rendition moves far to quick and the pacing is off. As well as this, I was given other pointers for things I should change to improve the overall video.

Things to change:

- Darken Kids on Trees faces

- Change guy to be on same side as previous (panel 20)

- Slow down the whole tempo

- 1-2 blend in transitions

- 3 slow down curtain and blend in

- pause end of panel 6 longer

- move texture up on 6

- Panel 9, narration needs to come in sooner

- Longer between panel 10 and 11

- Longer Pause between 13-14

- Make panel 16 last a lot longer

- Stop the bounce on panel 17

- Change transition on 17/18 (both same)

- Slow down text scenes a lot

- Panel 21, need to move back man

- Move man up as walking away 27 and darken

- 29 fade faces/darken

- 29 change animation, moves weird

- SLOW DOWN OVERALL TIMING

- Add Ambient music

After taking these into consideration, I went back and made all of these changes as well as a few others

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I carried on this process at least 5 more times, making changes, rendering out the video, watching it back and taking notes of things to change.

So far this is the video I have, I have slowed down the pace a lot and added some ambient music.